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Offline Hyruleansoldier

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« #60 on: February 22, 2007 »

Oh it surely did!

... and thank you
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« #61 on: February 28, 2007 »

It's been a while so here's an update, also this story has an official name now: "Arisen from the ashes"
i'll see if i can change the title. Anyway here is chapter 27:

Chapter: 27

The rain poured down, it was cold…so cold that he couldn’t feel the rest of his body. His hands were shaking and he could barely walk. Many of the bones in his body were broken and he was astounded of how he still was able to walk. He was ashamed and humiliated as he climbed the rocks and cliffs trying to reach some sort of shelter for the night. Since he couldn’t feel his feet he didn’t really know where he put them at times, this caused him to trip and hit the hard rock with his face. The pain in his entire body was overwhelming and blood was everywhere. Being frustrated with the entire thing he just screamed throughout the night, hoping that someone would save him.

“Silence” a voice suddenly appeared from nowhere, it was loud and determined. Link was startled and fell on his back. A dark cloud hovered before him, it looked vile and sinister. He didn’t know how to react to a talking cloud.

“You have been defeated time after time…always ignoring my help. I offer you true power…but it shall be your last chance” the cloud said. Link recognized the voice but couldn’t remember where he had heard it.

“Who are you?” Link questioned the cloud. No words were spoken for several minutes.

“I am the one who has allowed you to progress this far…and you shall obey me” the cloud claimed. Link frowned.

“I take orders from no one but myself and whoever you are you can forget that I’ll obey you” he said. A blistering pain expanded within Link’s head and the things that once drove him mad in the past came to life again, he screamed and covered his head with his hands.

“You pathetic fool, without me you would’ve been stuck in the asylum for the rest of your pathetic life” the cloud yelled with a loud voice as Link almost collapsed from the pain.

“I-I’m sorry p-please make it stop…” Link whimpered and fell to the ground. The pain ceased…but Link kept lying there holding his hands around his head, tears came from his eyes and he wanted to die, that would make everything stop.

“I expected you to lose that fight; a weakling like you can’t do anything against such foes on your own. Therefore I shall bestow an army upon you…they are my loyal soldiers of the past: the fallen” the cloud said and hovered high above the cliffs of Hrielia. Link watched the cloud as it started glowing with a green color.
“Oh fallen ones, rise from your graves and walk the world of mortals once more, fulfill that which you couldn’t before, obey your master” it yelled and before Link knew it the ground shook and a seemingly endless army of corpses still wearing their dark armor crept up from the earth. They formed a formation shaped as a square and stared at the cloud with their empty eye sockets.

“I have returned and I shall lead you into war once more, soon the man you see over at that hill will lead you into battle…spare no one and destroy anything in your path” the cloud’s loud speech chilled Link to his bones, the undead warriors all turned around and stared at him, then they nodded and looked at the cloud again. The cloud now took the shape of a man and eventually turned into a knight with dark armor and large horns on the helmet. Link recognized this man…he had seen him somewhere before not too long ago, in a forest somewhere but he couldn’t remember. All he knew was that he was sure that he had met that knight before.

The knight suddenly appeared in front of Link and grabbed him and examined him.

“You were such an easy opponent, but for your sake I hope that you will not fail, failures…makes me angry” he then dropped Link on the ground and disappeared. As he did the Triforce of courage started glowing on Link’s left hand. He watched the army in amazement: no one would ever be able to defeat it…not even Ales. The warriors all raised their weapons and shouted:

“All hail Hesernagoth, Death to our enemy, death to Sela”…
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« #62 on: March 01, 2007 »

Yay! I'd been expecting more for some time now. Good job (again), Ales!

"Arisen from the ashes" is rather good a title. Makes a nice alliteration with the 'A' from Ales
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« #63 on: March 01, 2007 »

Very nice edition Ales. I like the name of it too. Like HS said, good alliteration.

As to my own fan-fic, I had a relapse on the sickness I had a week ago and it hindered progress, but I think I got Ch. 5 figured out and am actually writing in between posts and what not. Be looking out for an update here pretty soon.
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« #64 on: March 03, 2007 »

*phew* i'm glad you like the title, and i'm even more glad that the story is still entertaining you. Zeldamaster i'm looking forward to your update =D, also here's a new chapter:

Also there are two references to two differrent things in this chapter, one of them is pretty obvious but the other can be tricky 


Chapter: 28

“Y-you’re not going to die are you?” she was nervous and she tried to hold back the tears. He smiled but that smile soon faded away and he looked down not facing her anymore. She nodded silently.

“T-that’s not what I wanted to hear” she said and looked the other way. He grabbed a hold of her arm and pulled her towards him, he hugged her and she cried. He patted her on the back and said:

“I swear…as long as you breathe…I will not die” he then let go of her and stepped up to Layne. The walk back to Kakariko had been fairly calm and they managed to avoid the Gorons. He put his hand on Layne’s forehead and patted her. They both mounted her and took off. Ales stopped in the middle of Kakariko and stared at the surroundings, he just realized that he had no idea where to go.

“Let’s go back to castle town, perhaps there are some survivors after Link’s visit” Zelda said. Ales turned around and looked at her with a bit of a sad look on his face.

“I’m afraid that no one probably survived, is it really a good idea?” he said

“You have a better idea?” she responded, they were both silent for a while.

“Hiyaa” Ales said and Layne started galloping. Travelling through Hyrule field was a wonderful experience. One would get the sense of freedom and often stop and gaze at the beauty. After a day of travelling they were outside the castle town gates. The entire place was like a ghost town and there was no sign of life. Ales felt Zelda’s head lean towards him from behind and he could hear her crying.
He felt sorry for her and wished that he could’ve helped her somehow, but this was Zelda’s own decision and it was her task to face this. The sound of a strain bow was heard and soon the sound of a flying arrow followed, he grabbed the arrow with his bare hand thus stopping it from connecting with his head. He broke it in two and back flipped off Layne, he drew the Mizka before his feet hit the ground and with a spin he cut three more arrows in half. In front of him was a cloaked figure with a bow, the archer started running away but Ales quickly threw the Mizka and pinned the archer to a wall by hitting a piece of the archer’s cloak.

Underneath the cloak was a woman with dark hair, she struggled to break free but it was useless.

“Who are you and why did you open fire at us?” Ales yelled at her. The woman didn’t respond and looked down on the ground.

“Adrienne?” Zelda said with a surprised look on her face. The two women looked at each other for a while and then almost lost their breath.

“You know each other?” Ales asked looking at the two of them.

“She’s my sister…I thought she died” Zelda said and rushed off Layne and released her. They both hugged and soon the three sat down and talked about what had happened.

“There is still a small group of hylian knights led by me who tries to sort everything out…but everything seems useless nowadays, ever since father died.” Adrienne said. Ales took a bite of a cucco wing.

“That’s your fourth one; you really like cucco’s don’t you?” Zelda said grinning at him.

 “Yep” Ales said with his mouth full and smiled. The two girls laughed.

“I’ll show you where our camp is, it’s here in castle town…as soon as mr.hero over there is done butchering the rules of etiquette” Adrienne laughed and tried to stop to be able to breathe.

“I know: once everything is fine again we’ll dress him up like a prince…oh he’ll be so cute” Zelda said teasingly. Ales looked at the two who kept staring at him, his eye going from left to right over and over. The two girls were still staring with big grins and kept looking at how he ate the cucco wing.

“Well excuse me” Ales tried to say but it was barely hearable as his mouth was full. The girls roared in laughter and so did Ales and almost choked on the cucco wing. Afterwards they took their things and was guided by Adrienne through the empty castle town, after a while they reached an empty and ordinary looking house. She knocked on the door in a certain pattern and it opened up. A tall Hylian knight opened up. At first he smiled at Adrienne but soon noticed Ales and Zelda.

“I’m sure you recognize my sister Tolecnal and this guy next to me is Ales, he’s going to assist us” Adrienne said.

“Princess Zelda and Ales the famous bounty hunter, or should I say the one who betrayed his own legacy?” Tolecnal said and kept staring at Ales. Adrienne looked at the two not understanding a thing.

“Poor old Mikaru…you really let him down, and now he’s dead and it’s too late for apologizing” He continued. Ales remained silent but stared fiercely at Tolecnal. Tolecnal gestured for them to enter and they did. But Ales was nervous and tried to prepare himself for the meeting with the other knights… 
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Offline Hyruleansoldier

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« #65 on: March 03, 2007 »

Oeh! Fresh work!

... And yes, it IS still entertaining. Keep up the nice work there Ales!
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« #66 on: March 05, 2007 »

Wow, nice chapters once again! The last one together with the girls was really cute though. Looking forward to the next chapters!
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« #67 on: March 07, 2007 »

Nice work Ales. I am putting the finishing touches on Ch. 5 and it will be up but Spring Break. Also as a reward for your patience guys, I am going to hit the writing hard during Spring Break and hopefully post  a lot of chapters to make up for my absence. Thanks for your patience and Ales keep up the good work.
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« #68 on: March 10, 2007 »

thanks a lot and i hope your chapter comes soon >=(..
here's a new one by the way:

Chapter: 29

They were taken into a huge room with a group of people all sitting and minding their own business. Tolecnal knocked on the wall to get everyone’s attention and then said:

“My fellow knights I bring you happy news: Our princess is still alive and has come to join us in our fight against the dark triangle” everyone cheered and clapped their hands but it soon ceased as they spotted Ales.

“Who’s that guy eh?” one asked. At this point Ales started sweating heavily and it didn’t get any better as he saw Tolecnal smirk at him before responding:

“This my friends…is Mikaru’s kid Ales” the entire room got quiet and everyone was staring at him calling all kinds of bad things for letting them all down, Zelda tried to put an end to it but they wouldn’t even listen to her. One knight stepped up to him with his sword drawn and with a cocky look on his face.

“I’m going to send you straight to hell and hopefully you’ll get a chance to at least spot Mikaru along the way” the knight said and raised his sword. Ales backed away a bit and said:

“I do not wish to hurt you” but the knight simply frowned and raised an eyebrow. Ales smirked and drew the Mizka.

“Ok I suppose that was a lie” he said and knocked the knight into a wall causing him to pass out. Now all knights charged at him but he managed to keep them all at bay. Zelda finally managed to end it but most of the knights were lying unconscious on the floor anyway.

“If this is Hyrule’s only line of defense then I can clearly state that Hyrule is pretty much screwed” Ales said and chuckled. Some days passed and Ales and the knights eased up on each other, instead they shared their own stories with each other. Rumors of a new and more powerful army arising were all over Hyrule.

“Look we need more than we got here if we are to win this battle, I suggest we split up some knights in groups and let them ask the Gorons and the Zoras for help, I’ll stay here myself with the rest and start preparing battle tactics” Ales said to the group, he knew that there wasn’t much time left now.

“You claim to know that out time is nigh yet no one else even knows if this threat is for real or not, why should we make such preparations?” Tolecnal asked Ales after the speech. Ales sat down on a chair and sighed.

“I’ve seen it in my dreams, a huge army led by…at first glance I thought it was Link but after thinking about it I don’t think it was him” he said, Tolecnal sat down next to him.

“So was it this Hesernagoth guy?” he asked. Ales shook his head and put his face in the palm of his hand.

“All I saw was a silhouette but I’m certain of that it belonged to neither of the two and yet it seemed so familiar, the army destroyed everything in my dream but I’m certain of that there’s another way to end it, or else I would not have received these warnings” Ales sighed once again and got back up and looked outside through a window, it was a cold night with almost no clouds, even the moon looked intimidating.

“Hey Tolecnal…I’m going to bed, tomorrow we’ll send out the groups and get ready, ok?” he said and looked neither happy nor sad. Tolecnal nodded and soon Ales found himself inside of his room. He was exhausted after all the planning he had done today. He lay down on his bed and closed his eye.

“Sleepy are we?” a voice suddenly came out of nowhere and caused Ales to fall out of his bed. A dark figure emerged from the shadows.

“Hesernagoth?” Ales didn’t know if he was going to feel scared or just surprised.

“I have come to offer yet another clue to you” Hesernagoth said.

“Why don’t you just tell me right here and right now what the hell is going on?” Ales yelled. Hesernagoth chuckled and responded:

“Figuring something out is part of the fun, but enough small talk” Hesernagoth put his hand on Ales’ forehead and suddenly Ales had some sort of vision:

He was standing in a dark temple in front of a dark sphere, there was something written on its pedestal:

“The essence of Hesernagoth whom was slain by Sela rests here” he then acted on his own as if he was being controlled but he soon figured that he was simply a spectator of an event that had already happened. He reached out for the sphere and grabbed it. He then threw it on the ground causing it to shatter. He felt dark energy running through him. Now the environment changed and he was standing before the lifeless body of princess Zelda. He cried as he saw her with her arms twisted in all kinds of ways and blood flowing everywhere.

He fell on his knees and cried, but soon the environment changed again and showed him standing in front of some sort of portal. He stared at it for minutes until he entered it. Now he was back in his room…the vision had come to an end. Hesernagoth was nowhere to be seen either. It took hours before he could go back to sleep again and he checked on Zelda to make sure she was ok. He still had no idea of what was going on but somehow he knew that whatever the answer was…it wasn’t going to be a pleasant one… 
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« #69 on: March 11, 2007 »

Nice chapter Ales. Good work yet again.

Listen, please have mercy on me, I know it has been really long time since the last update on my fan-fic, but I ran into a lot of issues. I am writing it as of this moment and I will hopefully have it up by tonight. Thank you for your extreme patience yet again.
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« #70 on: March 12, 2007 »

Thank you, i just hope i'm not giving too much away too early 

When you have this really nice secret thing (such as Ales is Nakashi) and the time comes for you to reveal it...you kinda don't want to :D

And yay for me because i've FINALLY decided how the story should end (trust me i've been having tons of ideas), and now i'm rambling again :
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« #71 on: March 12, 2007 »

Oeh! It was a very nice read again!

Looking forward to mooore!
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« #72 on: March 12, 2007 »

Yes definitely looking forward to your next chapter.
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« #73 on: June 01, 2007 »

*28 days later* i return...i hate to say this but.....Arisen from the ashes has now officially...arisen from the ashes . So here's chapter 30, i've had a writers block for quite some time now, i hope you enjoy though.


Chapter: 30

Was he real? It just didn’t make any sense why he’d appear and offer clues…like he was a mere toy, how dare he? Ales Is a respected man and should be treated with respect.

“What am I thinking?” Ales said to himself realizing the bizarre thoughts he had. He had felt it more and more as time passed that he was losing himself, he felt as if some darkness within him was fighting to take control. There wasn’t much time now before the war would begin. The troops had returned with bad news: The Zoras had mysteriously disappeared and the gorons refused to help calling it a “cursed war”.

“Idiotic creatures, without their help we cannot hope to defeat the great army…why do they not obey?” Ales mumbled to himself and pushed a knight out of his way. The knights were starting to fear Ales more and more as the days had passed…everyday he just seemed to grow…darker somehow. He even snapped at Zelda once talking about how she will learn to respect him. At times they’d find Ales sitting on a hill and gazing at the stars, it was at these times when you could safely talk to him. The night before the war Zelda approached him at one of these moments:

“Nervous?” she carefully asked him still being cautious towards him. Ales didn’t move a muscle and just kept on staring, as this war drew closer his memories of old all came back to him and combined with his confusion and his search for answers it was just too much for him. He finally turned his head towards her and said:

“It’s all here again…history does always repeat itself it seems, I remember that the goddesses promised me answers and yet I have received none…they’re a bunch of liars that’s for sure” Zelda went pale, how could he defy the goddesses like this?

 “You should thank the goddesses that they’re still keeping you alive and that they still have faith in you Ales” she said. Ales simply frowned at her and got up on his legs, the Ales she knew would’ve given her a smile and helped her up. But during the past days he had changed a lot.

“If it were up to me I’d choose death, what exactly am I fighting for? Who cares what the hell happens to Hyrule, we’re all going to die anyway. I think parts of the puzzle is finally clearing up to me, I think I understand partly what Hesernagoth is trying to tell me…I also know that your death princess will not be pleasant” He snapped at her and walked away. Hours passed and he decided to rest up before his great battle. He threw himself at the bed but found himself falling through a white void and eventually floating in midair. In front of him three figures materialized taking the shapes of three women.

“It must be hard for you during these dark times Sela, how are you holding up?” the three said. Ales laughed at them and it took a while before he said anything:

“I believe that you already know so cut the politeness, you promised me answers and yet I’m still filled with questions. And what is up with Hesernagoth? He’s not really what we think he is right?”
The three looked at each other with sad faces and then turned to Ales.

“You have lost your heart to darkness, your sorrow and grief has become too much for you…we’d hoped that this time things would have a different outcome…but history seems to indeed repeat itself.” Their voices were filled with sorrow. Ales was now quiet and stared at them.

“You have now sealed your own fate Sela, go and face it” their voices echoed throughout the void as they began to fade. Ales panicked and yelled:
“Wait stop, what do you mean?” but they were already gone. He was back in his bed sweating like mad. His heart was pounding rapidly and he could barely breathe. Such a fool he had been all along. He laid still and listened to the wind in the trees and looked at the pale moon. He heard the voices of the three echo within his head:

“Your fate has been sealed”
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« #74 on: June 02, 2007 »

Aha!  Another good read.

Good to have you back, Ales
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« #75 on: June 03, 2007 »

I enjoyed the reading, once again! Excellent work! Hope to read more real soon!
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« #76 on: June 08, 2007 »

thank you both here's a new chapter hot off the press...the end is close my friends

Chapter: 31

“Ales I need to see you right now” Tolecnal yelled across the corridors, he didn’t get a response though. It was early in the morning and the morning light blinded him at times. He rubbed his eyes and scratched his beard a bit as he stumbled upon a lower grade knight.

“Hey do you know where Ales is?” he asked the young knight who turned around and looked out of a window.

“Yeah as I thought, commander Ales is on that hill over there” he finally responded and then left for his quarters. Tolecnal hurried over to Ales and tapped him on the shoulder. He turned around; Ales seemed to be very tired as if he hadn’t slept all night.

“Ales I came to tell you: later this evening a few more knights will join us, they were out on field missions but are ready to take part in the war” he said. Ales sighed a bit and got back up on his legs.

“Good we need all help we can get, I have also figured out how we shall win this war” He seemed a bit more happy than usual, yet only a little. Tolecnal raised an eyebrow and listened carefully.

“It’s easy, all we have to do is to destroy Hesernagoth and to do that you must be all powerful and defeat Link first, doesn’t it sound easy?” Ales was very cheerful now but it was clear that he was being sarcastic. Tolecnal sighed and Ales left him alone on the hill without saying a word. He felt abandoned and on his own. No longer were the goddesses on his side and no longer could he relate to anyone. He was losing himself to the extent of just running away from it all, but he had never run before and neither would he now. Zelda seemed to stalk him probably to attempt talking some sanity into him. Did they think he was crazy? He knew he wasn’t but they thought so.

“They must be crazy” he mumbled to himself, “they’re all insane”. He sat down trying to catch up with himself as he spotted Zelda walking towards him. He knew that she only meant well…or was she? She obviously cared for Link maybe he convinced her to act as a spy? Maybe Link knows what they’re planning? He must get rid of her…but no people would notice and they’d call him insane. Ales ran before Zelda caught up with him, he hid himself among a couple of hills. He was breathing heavily and felt tired…very tired. Before he knew it he was asleep.

“The people need you Ales, what are you doing?” A voice was heard throughout a dark forest. Ales was scared and tried to find where the voice was coming from but it seemed to come from nowhere.

“Your mind is lost and to prevail you must find your way out of this forest” the voice continued. Ales did recognize this voice but couldn’t place it. It was a voice he hadn’t heard in a long time.

“Find me or forever shall you be lost” the voice yelled. Ales started running through the forest but everything looked the same with no apparent exit.

“The answer lies within you” the voice was heard again. Ales tried to understand what it meant and sat down meditating. The forest seemed to clear a bit, as he regained his calm the darkness started to fade. In front of him a figure appeared, it was a tall man who looked very similar to Ales but older and with two eyes, there were some differences such as some chin bones and the nose. Somehow Ales knew the identity of this man by instinct.

“Father?” he let out but one could barely hear him. The man in front of him smiled at him but remained in his natural position with his arms crossed.

“You have done well, I expected no less from my…son” there were tears in his eyes but he appeared to be holding it back. Ales approached him slowly not knowing whether to laugh or cry.

“The people need you to be strong my son, lend them your strength and fight for the freedom of our land just as I did once” his father said. Ales nodded but still felt discouraged. His father appeared to sense this.

“Do not worry about the divines for you are not Sela anymore, you are Ales.” He said.

“Your true foe Is clouded in the darkness but has been in front of you the whole time, accept the truth and hide he shall no more. You know the answer already, you know that Hesernagoth is dead…accept the truth.” His voice faded and everything around him too.

The moon, always as pale and cold…always there staring at him. He felt dizzy and had a hard time getting up. The sky was clear and the stars shone brightly. There was a gathering below him.

“Ales finally there you are, where have you been? Here are the knights I told you about” Tolecnal said sounding relieved to see Ales. The knights were about 20 with different ages. Everyone looked self secure…except one. A young boy with black hair who was staring down the ground with a pale face. Ales approached him and stood before him.

“You, state your name” he said with a demanding tone. The boy was startled as if he had been daydreaming of sorts.

“Aaron sir” he responded. Ales examined him closely.

“Age?” he asked.

“17 sir” Aaron responded. Ales just knew that this wasn’t a coincidence; the goddesses were giving him a choice. Ales stood still for several minutes staring at Aaron who started to sweat.

“You are hereby relieved from combat duty, get away from here…go far and don’t return until everything is over” Ales said with a gentle grin. Aaron seemed to be a bit insulted by this:

“Sir I’m perfectly capable of fighting, I’ve had my training and there always has to be a first time to fight in a war” he said. Ales chuckled and nodded, the boy even had the same cocky mouth as he did.

“Aaron if things go wrong we need the bloodline to live on, that is your mission. I have been in your place wishing that my commander would say the same thing but he didn’t” Ales said. Aaron stepped forward and yelled:

“Sir” but Ales cut him off.

“You are relieved from combat duty am I making myself clear?” he yelled back at Aaron. He nodded and left the area. Ales then mounted Layne who was nearby.

“Greater numbers does not always mean victory, this night history shall be written in blood…”
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« #77 on: June 09, 2007 »

Nice piece!

I really liked the part in the "Lost Woods", with Ales' father.


Just one question though - what's up with Sela?  I didn't really get that...  Was it something already mentioned before?
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« #78 on: June 09, 2007 »

Nice piece!

I really liked the part in the "Lost Woods", with Ales' father.


Just one question though - what's up with Sela?  I didn't really get that...  Was it something already mentioned before?

Glad you enjoyed it, now i'm not sure if i understood your question but Sela is the first guardian created by the godesses, the fire phoenix and the one Ales was in his past life
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« #79 on: June 12, 2007 »

I enjoyed this chapter once again, it's getting exciting! Hope to read the next one real soon!
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