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« #80 on: June 15, 2007 »

I enjoyed this installment as well. Look forward to the next one.
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« #81 on: June 21, 2007 »

Hello and thanks guys  . Here is my newly finished chapter 32 which turned out to be a lot longer than i expected...but nonetheless i'm satisfied with it. I hope you'll enjoy it (all these smileys seem so awkward when i think of the chapter itself...you'll notice why soon)



Chapter: 32

The rain hit him like a million whips to the face as he rode across Hyrule field. In front of him they were…the fallen, behind him were his troops keeping a steady pace. All this seemed so familiar to him but that wasn’t really strange at all since he had gone to war before and against the fallen as well. He now wore a golden Hylian knight’s armor with a red cape swaying in the foul wind. The cold was unbearable but the rain was worse.

A lone black horse rode towards him. Ales grinned as he identified the rider:

“Link how nice of you to join the party” he said but he quickly noticed that there was something sinister in his voice…on top of that he recognized that tone but he couldn’t really place it. Link didn’t grin like usual, instead he looked sorrowful. Who was the real bad guy here? Ales shook his head trying to shake off that thought as Link simply nodded and turned around and rode back to his side. Then Ales noticed it: Link was wearing the same armor he had seen at von cheese’s house…the poor old man didn’t make it after all. He was filled with rage at the thought.

A horn was heard echoing all around the empty fields…this was the end and Hyrule’s fate would be decided. Ales drew the Mizka and the knights behind him drew their blades as well. On the opposite side the walking corpses of the fallen cackled…a sound that froze the blood of any mortal.

“Charge” Ales yelled as he rode towards the seemingly undefeatable army. It felt like an eternity before the two armies connected and the sound of metal and bone clashing together was ear deafening. Ales used both his blade as well as fire magic to strike down his opponents. They all worked according to plan: the other knights would keep the fallen occupied while Ales would race towards Link to defeat him once and for all. He could hear the screams of his fellow knights behind him and it didn’t matter how much he wanted to help them, they were dying for the sake of Hyrule and he had to stick to the plan to keep their deaths from being in vain. Layne had a hard time too and Ales did his best to keep all of them off her and protect her from swords and spears. He could spot Link in the distance…not much left now. Suddenly Hesernagoth’s face appeared before him for a brief second and he felt dizzy and fell off Layne. What happened? A stingy pain in his arm, he had been hit by an arrow but it appeared to have been infused with some dark power. Link was holding a bow and Layne had run off. Many of the fallen were now staring at him smirking and lusting for revenge.

 He quickly created a fire sphere around him that shielded him, he didn’t know how he did it…he just acted on instinct somehow. Plowing through foes was a lot easier now than before and after a lot of jumping and stabbing he stood before Link’s black horse. But why did he not burst with self confidence like usual? Why did he look so sad? Was part of his old self still in there?


“I…did not want any of this” Link said as if he was going to burst out in tears any second. Ales noticed first now a major difference: Link’s eyes were blue and not red. Ales had a bad feeling about the entire thing and it didn’t change when he suddenly saw Hesernagoth standing on a cliff with his black cape swaying in the wind…holding Zelda by the neck.

“Hesernagoth release her, this just between you and me” Ales yelled with fear in his voice, his heart was pounding rapidly and his stomach felt as if it was turning itself inside out.

“Ales…if I kill you he’ll let her live…but if I fail she’ll die” Link said and his eyes were red from tears. Ales turned to Link and couldn’t help but to sympathize with him.

“Link…I can save her, no I will save her” Ales said feeling even worse. Link sobbed and shook his head.

“No Ales you can’t and you know that, stop denying it for you have seen your future. Just…allow me to kill you” Link let out with much pain in his voice. Ales was put before the hardest choice he’s ever made for he did know how it would end. Would he give up Hyrule to save her life or sacrifice her life to save Hyrule? No he didn’t have to make that choice.

“I can change that future” Ales yelled and raised the Mizka. Link had a look of disappointment on his face but dismounted his horse and drew the blade that once banished evil. Hesernagoth chuckled and seemed very amused, he then disappeared along with Zelda.

 The two blades clashed together but there was no hate between the two, only sadness and the instinct of surviving. Link pushed himself away and fired several dark orbs at Ales who dodged them and leapt towards Link. Link somersaulted to dodge Ales’ attack and grabbed him smacking him with the hilt repeatedly and then throwing him high up in the air to follow up with some strikes with his sword. Ales blocked most of the strikes with his blade but got cut on his arm and chest and crashed down while Link landed swiftly. Link was about to plunge the sword into him when Ales made a quick leap back on his legs kicking Link in the stomach and proceeding with a spin attack which cut him in the face.

Link let out a small sound signaling pain but obviously held it back, Link’s right eye had been cut and was beyond saving. Ales didn’t waste any time and attacked again but was pushed back by Link’s shield and hit numerous times with dark orbs all over his body. After the bombardment Ales could barely stand up and wobbled a bit to the left. Link aimed for Ales’ throat but missed due to a swift dodge which then proceeded into grabbing Link’s blade and pushing it forward and thus striking Link in the face with the hilt. Link fell on his back and saw Ales coming with a finishing move and quickly rolled out of the way directing Ales’ blade towards the ground. Ales had a hard time pulling it out again and Link threw a giant dark orb that sent Ales flying meters. The pain in his body was unbearable and he couldn’t move.

Link slowly approached Ales ready to finish him off.

“Link don’t, we can still save her” Ales yelled. Both he and Link were bleeding all over but the cold rain had made their bodies nearly numb.

“I’m sorry Ales, this is the only way to save her…and you from yourself” Link said with great sorrow in his voice.

“What?” Ales said but there was no time to answer that as the blade came pummeling down towards his throat. Ales had no choice but to act fast despite the consequences. He charged up a great fire barrier and grabbed the blade pushing it backwards using the power of the flame barrier. That power was too much for Link and he was knocked back. Ales quickly got back up on his legs and dashed for the Mizka pulling it out from the ground. He turned around and found Link striking unexpectedly fast and reacted by instinct: plunging the Mizka into Link’s stomach. Link dropped the sword and fell to the ground with a shocked expression on his face. Ales was terrified over what he had done.

“No” he yelled “Link don’t give up I’ll patch you up” but Link grinned and just shook his head.

“I…was foolish to think I could…save her” he said, his voice was weak. Ales grabbed him by the shoulders and shook him.

“Link this is not how your life will end, fight it” Ales said with tears in his eye. Link stared at the sky with an almost emotionless face.

“The rain…it’s so beautiful” he said as if he was in some far away land. Ales stared at him and didn’t speak, Link turned his face towards Ales.

“I never wanted to hurt anyone…I wanted to save those people I wanted…” but Link was interrupted by Ales hugging him and crying.

“I’m the one who should’ve died not you” he said

“I’m…a failure…I do not deserve to be called hero” Link said with tears flowing. He showed many signs of fear both for his awaiting death and for Zelda.

“You are an honorable man, and far greater hero than I ever will be” Ales said letting go of him. Link smiled a little bit and suddenly looked amazed staring at nothing.

“S-saria?” he let out and suddenly seemed calm. After a while he ceased breathing. Ales let go of him and softly put him down on the ground. He got back up and bowed down.

“You die as a free man oh hero of time” He said. He then picked up Link’s blade and discovered that the darkness around it disappeared. Then a green triangle shot out from Link’s body and disappeared into the sky. A familiar face appeared…it was Tolecnal.

“Ales I’m so glad you’re alive…oh so he’s…” he said and looked at Link’s body. Ales turned to Tolecnal and handed him the master sword.

“Return this to the temple of time and…please give this man a proper burial” he said still with tears all over his face. Tolecnal nodded and Ales left without saying anything else. He climbed the cliff and walked for a while until he heard a familiar voice:

“Ah…I already knew this was the path you would take” Ales turned around and the rage within him had no limits.

“Hesernagoth” he yelled and leapt at him…

 
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« #82 on: June 22, 2007 »

Oh my...  That was beautiful.

In a tragic yet dignified way.  Ales... Link...

Just great.

You, too, keep up the nice work.
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« #83 on: June 22, 2007 »

I have to agree with HS on this one....Beautiful!  Tragedy meets dignity. Keep it up.
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« #84 on: June 25, 2007 »

Thank you 

I always thought Link had been sort of like the guy you just own like that so this was an attempt of bringing him back to his former glory.

Seems like i made it
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« #85 on: June 26, 2007 »

You did a good job on it.

(Working hard on ch. 9 of Darkness Within guys. Thanks for your patience.)
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« #86 on: July 08, 2007 »

why oh why am i such a slow writer? Well i do have a reason though...i'm preparing a lot for the ending which means that i can have this idea that later will evolve or be scrapped entirely as i go on.

The final chapters are still in their betas but i'm not quitting so i think i can safely say that you can expect an update somewhere in the near future

in other news Ales smashed my nuts with a sledge
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« #87 on: July 08, 2007 »

Take your time. I know how you feel......
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« #88 on: July 13, 2007 »

why oh why am i such a slow writer? Well i do have a reason though...i'm preparing a lot for the ending which means that i can have this idea that later will evolve or be scrapped entirely as i go on.

The final chapters are still in their betas but i'm not quitting so i think i can safely say that you can expect an update somewhere in the near future

in other news Ales smashed my nuts with a sledge

I know all about being slow in the writing department...  You, too, are a perfectionist, no?  Though that can sometimes keep you from progressing much, it also ensures you you eventually get to deliver something you're truly proud of, which I feel is quite important, especially if you're writing for more people.

So don't stress out, and take your time.  You can do it!
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« #89 on: July 13, 2007 »

Yes i'm quite a perfectionist indeed anyway as i promised here is an update:

Chapter: 33

The pain was unbearable…it felt as if his nose was cracked open. He crashed into the ground. He felt something in his face…yes it was blood. Luckily his nose wasn’t cracked.

“Pathetic…is that really all you can do?” Hesernagoth said in a surprised tone. Getting up was tough but he’d been through worse before.

“Where is she you bastard?” Ales said with an exhausted voice. Hesernagoth chuckled and waved his hand showing Zelda trapped inside a huge hourglass that mysteriously was floating in the sky.

“You call me a bastard?” Hesernagoth burst into laughter. Ales looked at Zelda who stared at him with a worried look.

“What’s so damn funny?” Ales yelled. Hesernagoth ignored his question and turned around gazing at the battlefield. The war was still raging on and Ales felt utterly helpless: the man in front of him was perhaps not the Hesernagoth of old…but he was as powerful as a god. Ales could unlock Sela’s full power but doing so would cause his fragile human body to literally destroy itself.

“When the time comes for Zelda to die…so comes the age of darkness” Hesernagoth said quietly so that Ales could barely hear him. Suddenly the sand in the hourglass started to flow and it was obvious that when the hourglass was filled Zelda would drown in the sand. Hesernagoth turned around and drew his mighty blade. He made some practice swings with it as Ales took off all his heavy armor and stretched his left arm a bit while readying his sword.

“This…is the end” Hesernagoth said and Ales noticed how the environment changed and turned into a grassy field with a burning house…they were both standing in the middle of it. Strangely the hourglass was still hovering in the air as if Ales was supposed to know how much time was left.

“In order for a warrior to face his ultimate foe he must first face his inner demons” Hesernagoth said and got into a battle position. Ales knew this place…it was his home when he saw the murder of his parents. He tried to ignore the sorrow he felt and was about to face Hesernagoth when he noticed that he was no longer there…instead his foe had turned into his own father. Ales was paralyzed which cost him as he received a fire orb in his face…but the fire was tainted by a dark nature.

It burned him a bit but it was nothing big. Ales knew that he had to fight or else everything would be lost. He leapt at his father and hit him with the hilt and then proceeding with a kick in the stomach. His father smirked

“Holding back are we now? Ohhh that will cost you” he said and knocked Ales down and slashed away at him with lightning speed. Blood was covering his clothes and the furious slashing proceeded with a punch in the face. Everything was blurry and he couldn’t stand straight…for the first time in his life he couldn’t fight. Ales looked at the hourglass…he had to choose, and he already knew what to do.

He threw several fire orbs at his father who was knocked down and then somersaulted in the air and planted it into his fathers chest. Everything around him started spinning and he was floating in darkness. In front of him was Hesernagoth again who chuckled and gestured telling Ales to look at the hourglass. Some new area seemed to spawn. It was Hyrule field…but completely ravaged. An army charged at him…Ales quickly noticed how he was the only one and braced himself for the assault. With mighty fire magic he killed huge groups and cut many men into half. Their screams of pain echoed throughout the vast field. The rain…always the rain, it brought nothing but death. He suddenly sensed an attack behind him and quickly spin attacked planting the Mizka into his attackers throat. But the face he met chilled him to his bone.

“D-diggs?” Ales said and could barely breathe at the thought of what he had done. He watched his friend take his dying breath and fall to the ground. The army he had been slaying was the one he had fought for. Everyone looked at him as if he was some sort of evil being…was he? He suddenly heard Zelda scream at him from the hourglass. All this was wasting his time, he had to hurry.

“Slay them all” he heard a voice…it was his own only much more sinister. He knew that he could only get out of this if he killed every single one. But there were many people he once knew and that he wished he could meet again…there were even very young boys who had been forced to fight due to shortages. Zelda’s time was running out…Ales would have to sacrifice every trace of good he still had in his heart to save her…he started killing them, ripping them apart and burning them alive and the screams of the young children pierced his heart every time. In just a couple of minutes he was all alone standing on top of the corpses of those who had acted as a surrogate family for him once.

He started floating in darkness again and saw Hesernagoth laughing at him while once again alarming him of the time he had left. It was only a matter of minutes left before Zelda’s end. He was now suddenly standing on a mountain and below him was Hyrule…it was an excellent view of the entire land. Hesernagoth appeared before him, floating in midair.

“Destroy it…destroy the goddesses…destroy Sela” he said and disappeared. In his hand appeared a small replica of Hyrule, one of the goddesses and one of Sela. But how could he take it all away? All those innocents…those who look after it…and his own soul. Was he willing to sacrifice it all? He heard Zelda inside the hourglass, she was all under sand now and there were only seconds left until her end.

“Are you willing to sacrifice greater things for her cause?” Hesernagoth’s chilling voice yelled at him from thin air. Ales hesitated…then he crushed the replica of Sela. It felt as if he was stabbed in his chest only seconds after. The pain was so great that he fell to his knees.

“I…I sacrifice…myself” Ales yelled and dropped the other replicas.

“Wrong answer” Hesernagoth yelled and appeared again. Link was right…he couldn’t save her…but if he destroyed Hyrule and the goddesses everything they’d fight for would be for naught.

“Zelda” he yelled in panic but couldn’t move because of the severe pain. Suddenly an ocarina was heard…the tunes were simple and enchanting. Everything around Ales froze and a blinding light appeared. The light took the form of a warrior clad in golden armor…it couldn’t be yet it was…

“Link” Ales yelled. Link smiled and shattered the hourglass removing Zelda from the sand, she was also frozen in time though. Link then walked over to Ales and grabbed his shoulders, a strange light filled Ales’ body and he felt fully healed again.

“The Hero of time rushes in to save the day” was suddenly heard from Hesernagoth who started moving.

“Did you actually believe that the song of time could freeze me?” Hesernagoth frowned.

“I’ll send you both to hell” Hesernagoth yelled and fired a massive wall of dark fire.

“No…this time…you will not control me” Link said and took out his hands blocking the wall of dark flames. He was struggling to hold it. Ales could do nothing but watch as time started to flow again. Link with all his might sent the wall of dark flames back at Hesernagoth. Hesernagoth took a heavy blow from his own attack. Link turned to Ales:

“A sword wields no strength unless the hand that holds it has courage…remember those words” Link then grabbed Zelda and disappeared. Hesernagoth frowned and the environment changed back to where they started, the war against the fallen was still raging on.

“I have toyed enough with you” Hesernagoth said and threw away his dark blade, taking out another which was still sheathed.

“Do you understand now?” Hesernagoth asked. Ales was chilled to the bone because indeed did he now realize the truth…a truth that had been there all along. Hesernagoth unsheathed the blade and removed his helmet slowly.

Ales knew that he would now face the greatest foe he’d ever encountered in his entire life


This…is the end…   
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« #90 on: July 29, 2007 »

Wow, that was very good Ales. Epic...can't wait for more!

I now feel the ever present shadow of your fan-fic overshadowing mine, but I care not. Your fan-fic is awesome, keep up the good work. I just have to get off my lazy ass and get WRITING..ha.

Good work Ales.
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« #91 on: July 29, 2007 »

I've just read that whole thing now, and it is just... immense, I'm writing my own story, it isn't a fanfic and it isn't nearly finished, but when it is I will post it sometime (it may take a while as in it may never get finished)
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« #92 on: July 31, 2007 »

Oh my...  That was a really nice, long, epic piece, Ales!!

Good to see you're still at it!  Great job!
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« #93 on: July 31, 2007 »

Wow, that was very good Ales. Epic...can't wait for more!

I now feel the ever present shadow of your fan-fic overshadowing mine, but I care not. Your fan-fic is awesome, keep up the good work. I just have to get off my lazy ass and get WRITING..ha.

Good work Ales.
Thanks although i don't want to overshadow your fic...actually that's not possible as they are different in style (at least i think so) so i'd say they're equal and besides you're not as far into the story as i am

I've just read that whole thing now, and it is just... immense, I'm writing my own story, it isn't a fanfic and it isn't nearly finished, but when it is I will post it sometime (it may take a while as in it may never get finished)

Thanks it's always fun with a new reader =D, i'll be sure to read your story when it's done...just tell me when it's up

Oh my...  That was a really nice, long, epic piece, Ales!!

Good to see you're still at it!  Great job!
I'm glad you liked it as well ^^

the story is as you've probably noticed at it's very end...it's a little sad XD

oh well i just want to make the final fight good so i'm taking time to plan it all.




well that and i'm a bit lazy :
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« #94 on: August 01, 2007 »

I will have to start my story again, because it was on a different comp, and it just got formatted, oh well, new ideas may come from this, better ones
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« #95 on: August 06, 2007 »

well i do know that having huge breaks in a story can give you time to improve it. During my huge breaks in this story i remade the plot in my head a lot of times. The story went in a completely different direction than i planned it to.

P.S: i remade the ending...Again :
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« #96 on: August 14, 2007 »

Take your time Ales.
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« #97 on: September 25, 2007 »

DAWN OF THE 28TH DAY
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Ok it's been a while....again. Well i'm just passing through to inform you of that the final chapter is complete including an epilogue afterwards...oh and i'm sorry for not posting in a long time
[provoke]but it's really ZeldaMasters fault as he told me to take my time[/provoke] nah i'm just kidding now...the final chapter might confuse you at times, i've tried to minimize it as much as i can but if you have any question about anything after reading then i'm happy to answer your question.
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Chapter: 34

The black helmet fell to the ground with a loud clang, he took his sword and raised it proudly. Ales now understood everything and could only stand in awe as he watched the true face of darkness reveal itself. The man who had taken the slain Hesernagoth’s powers and pretended to be him was…

“Now you and I will do battle…because we all know there’s only room for one guardian” he said.

“You’re no guardian…you’re…” Ales yelled but he was unable to finish his sentence. The man in front of him grinned.

“The true guardian…” he said “The real Sela” he yelled. Ales wasn’t sure how it all worked but it was true: somehow in front of him was an older version of himself.

“How is this possible? This makes no sense” Ales said, however he was still shocked and therefore not in a battle position. His dark self took advantage of this and quickly leaped into the air and kicked him in the face. Ales crashed into a rock but got up quickly and snapped out of his confusion preparing himself for another assault. His dark self fired away dark energy and teleported all around Ales to confuse him. Ales deflected the dark energy and dodged the dark one’s assault countering with a bombardment of fire orbs.

The dark one grabbed the orbs in the palm of his hand and laughed and afterwards proceeding in returning them to the sender. Ales quickly dodged them but he barely got away due to their high velocity. They rammed into each other clashing their blades. Apparently his older self was much stronger because Ales was having a hard time holding him and just seconds after he felt for the first time in his life his own blade cut him although lightly as he back flipped to get away. How could he be so strong? He was as strong as a full god yet his body shouldn’t be able to handle it.

“Fighting you is no fun it seems…hmm oh but you must be wondering how my body can withstand full power?” The dark one said. Ales nodded but didn’t let his guard down this time.

“You see the body can only take half of a god’s power normally and like you are now I once only possessed half of Sela’s power. But as I acquired the dark powers of Hesernagoth they merged together with Sela’s and while the power itself only feels like a half god’s powers…they are as powerful as a full god” This chilled Ales to his bones as he knew that against such an opponent he’d stand no chance.

Ales attacked his dark self with both fire and steel but all attacks were futile, he was too fast and too strong for Ales to handle. Before he knew it he was lying face down on the cold rock, feeling the cold rain all over his back. He felt a hand grab his hair and slowly pulling him up.

“This is going to hurt” he heard himself say behind him in a sadistic voice. Seconds later his face was rammed into the ground repeatedly until he nearly passed out. He was then thrown a few meters crashing into the ground. He could barely move coughing up his own blood and nearly choking on it. He could only watch as his dark self slowly approached him. He had more of a beard than Ales did and more scars…his face was older and his hair slightly longer but was hanging freely, he had the same eye patch as Ales did and still wore Hesernagoth’s dark armor with the exception of the helmet, his face was very pale…almost white and his version of the Mizka was more worn out than Ales’.


“Why?” Ales asked as his dark self stood before him. The dark one grinned and chuckled.

“I have offered you clue after clue and you still don’t fully get it? Well I guess I could explain it to you before I finish you: I was like you, I had the same quest as you…and I wanted to save Zelda as much as you do.” The dark one seemed sorrowful and paused but soon continued:

“I failed however in doing so and I had to watch her dead body…all twisted…you’ve seen it I have no need to describe it. This was too much and I realized that I was no hero, I was a mere pawn playing the goddesses game and they were having fun on my behalf. I rebelled against them and thanks to research of ancient scrolls I heard of a portal that could take you back in time. I entered this portal…you see Hesernagoth’s Essence was locked away in the same place as that ancient god’s essence once was, I took Hesernagoth’s powers as my own and simply acted out the legend as it was said: hiding in the Triforce of courage, creating Ganondorf thus creating Link and so on”

“So…Hyrule has been stuck in a time loop?” Ales asked. His dark self nodded but then chuckled again.

“Yes…I too fought myself and I won due to the incredible rage I had” Ales felt hopeful all of a sudden: that would mean that he would win as well and afterwards he could simply not go back in time thus stopping the loop.

“Do not think you’ll win though” his dark self said. “You see this time things are different: Zelda didn’t die and even such a small change could completely change the outcome of our battle” Ales heart sank now that he realized the truth behind this. What would he do? There was no way that he could win but if he died then Hyrule would be destroyed along with everyone…not just Hyrule the entire world would be no more…he had no choice, he had only used that dangerous power once before and only for a short time…the full power of Sela which would ultimately if used for too long kill him.

“Now fighting you has been uninteresting and therefore you are of no more use to me…tell the goddesses I said hello” his dark self said and swung his blade towards Ales’ throat. Just as it was about to connect a mighty wall of fire sent the dark one flying. He had not expected that to happen, in front of him was no longer the scared younger version of himself…it was pure fire shaped as a phoenix holding the Mizka in it’s talons.

“I…I remember…” it said, it’s wings widened and it leapt into the air hovering above the dark one

“I remember everything” the phoenix yelled and threw a gigantic fire orb towards Ales who was burnt a bit trying to get away.

“Sela?” he could barely speak…somehow he feared the guardian he once was.

“Ales…you are hereby sentenced to death by the behalf of the goddesses…and me” Sela said with an angry voice and dive attacked Ales ramming him into a wall. Sela took his blade to finish Ales off when Ales threw dark fire in his face and kicked him which knocked Sela back.

“This fight just got interesting…I wonder how long your body can take all that power at once” Ales said and grinned as he felt more confident…for a second he had forgotten that he had godly powers of his own.

“You are a fool to oppose me Ales…you are a mockery of everything you once stood for” Sela said with anger in his voice and slammed his talons into the ground thus making the entire mountain crumble, as lot’s of debris was falling down Sela used telekinesis like powers to grab all the debris at once and throw it at Ales. The debris was blocked by dark energy from Ales and shattered to pieces. Ales then proceeded into somersaulting ready to plant his blade in Sela to finish him off. With a quick flap with his wings Sela created a barrier made out of fire which burnt Ales knocking him back. Sela then controlled this fire with his will and made it surround Ales and shrink thus trapping him in fire.

Ales screamed in agony as his entire body was catching fire and struggled to break free. Sela only watched and awaited his death. Eventually Ales somehow summoned a huge shockwave of dark energy that destroyed the fire and knocked Sela towards a sharp rock, the pain was horrible as the sharp rock pierced through his back and out of his chest. Sela didn’t even flinch though and ignored the pain simply removing the sharp rock and got back up.

They crashed into each other and smacked each other around into various objects. Steel often hit steel and fire hit dark energy. The mountain itself was almost just a pile of rocks which both of them used as weapons. Ales grew tired and climbed to the highest rock summoning a huge dark orb that easily could destroy half of Hyrule.

“You fool it’ll kill you too” Sela screamed at Ales who simply laughed and nodded.

“Indeed it will, if I’m going to die I’m taking people with me” he screamed and launched the orb. Sela felt panic like never before and rammed into the orb with all of his power pushing it back. But even his power couldn’t hold it for long and Ales laughed manically at him.

“Forgive me…” Sela said to himself as he was feeling weaker and weaker.

“There is no need to ask for forgiveness” a female voice said. Sela opened his eyes and found Din in front of him.

“Din” he said in a shocked tone. Din smiled at him and said:

“I will bestow power upon you so that Hyrule can be saved and your destiny fulfilled” shortly after that she disappeared and Sela felt strength like never before. He could now easily knock the orb back at Ales.

Minutes later all was silence…Ales had screamed in pain as the orb had knocked him to the ground. Sela now stood before him with Mizka in hand. Ales was in so much pain that he could only watch as Sela took his blade and shoved it through Ales’ throat. Sela disappeared and became once again the bounty hunter Ales. His skin was burnt all over however and was even falling off, his bones were shattered and his skull could be seen. He had overused Sela’s powers and that was too much for his body. He fell to the ground feeling faint and tired…the three goddesses appeared before him and smiled gently, they raised their hands and soon light surrounded him.

“Am I dead?”…   
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Epilogue

A week has past since the war and Hyrule is slowly recovering. The bloodline of the hylian knights is intact. Everyone seems to be in a good mood…except one.

“I’m sorry princess but if he was alive he’d be back by now” Zelda’s nursemaid said with a sad and worried voice…after all princess Zelda had been staring out at Hyrule field from her balcony in Hyrule castle hoping to see him return.

“He can’t be dead…he promised…” Zelda said and felt tears coming down her cheek.

“Sometimes you can’t live up to a promise, you know that” the nursemaid said and wiped the tears of her face. Zelda left the balcony and walked down the hallway and left the castle. The market was busy with repairs and there were still losses that families had to take care of. What had actually happened between Ales and Hesernagoth…no one knows, in fact the sudden end of the war…how the fallen had crumbled and posed no more threat…how a gigantic dark energy ball had appeared…the entire thing was a mystery.

She nearly tripped as some kids rushed by her playing; she couldn’t help but to smile as she knew that it was all thanks to him that these kids still played. Another mysterious thing was that when the mountain’s were searched they found a hollow dark armor and nothing more…no body was ever found

She continued out of Hyrule market and stood on top of a hill on Hyrule field enjoying the breeze. Some days ago she had been at Link’s funeral but she wasn’t as sad as the others as she had a moment to speak with his spirit shortly after he saved her one last time…she missed him so but she knew that he was happy now and that made her happy. But she didn’t know about him…where was he? It seemed as if he had just disappeared into thin air…was he dead as they all said…or is he still out there?

She lay down in the grass and looked at the blue sky…it was all so beautiful and she couldn’t help but to cry, it was hard for her to handle but she knew that she had to be strong.

“Dear goddesses…please tell me if he’s ok…please tell me if Ales is still out there” she whispered and closed her eyes. She felt her nose tickle and got up scratching it, upon doing so something fell off her nose…

…a red feather
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Offline Hyruleansoldier

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« #98 on: September 25, 2007 »

Good job, Ales!  Like the writing, like the story.  Kuddos. ^^
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« #99 on: September 26, 2007 »

Read it all. Amazing job! Kuddos!!
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