Hyruleansoldier
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The Paradox of Kirby: Suckage = Ownage ^_^
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*cough* You can't stop at such a cliffhanger ZeldaMaster... Keep up the good work! No pressure  |
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Sheldon Cooper PhD
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Okay guys,
I know that you are all clamoring for the next chapter of this ridiculously good fan-fic but at the request of ZeldaMaster I have been told to tell you guys that it will be longer than expected and he will post the next two chapters together as a compensation.
Don't shoot the messenger!
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Hyruleansoldier
Twilight Dreamlander
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*produces his FN Minimi (*) and empties his mag on ZA. THIS... IS... BELGIUM!!!  (*) Mini in name only |
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ZeldaMaster
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Ha ha guys. Do you not worry I have returned! I do not mean to leave hanging at but I just got so overwhelmed with school projects, homework, and sports that I had little time to write. But today I should have chapters 7 and 8 up. I hope you enjoy them. (I'm not so sure.)
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ZeldaMaster
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Without further or do, chapters 7 and 8. I don't know what you will think, these ones got me stuck for awhile. But hopefully you like them.
Ch. 7
"Ganondorf......" uttered King Daphnese Nohansen Hyrule II. The man he was speaking to rose up out of his chair and gave a mocking bow. "Why yes your highness, it is I." he said "Long has it been since that boy Link imprisoned me. Or have you forgotten that event entirely? Have you forgotten the existence of Ganondorf King of Evil!?" He paused to give the king time to answer. When there was none he continued "I had thought this was so. Well, my good king, I will forgive this act. It has been around 13 long years since I last walked Hyrule. I have already been to the Desert, looking for a place to call home, only too find that you banished my people to Terminia in an effort to bring peace to Hyrule. It seems it didn't last long though, for your daughter, the fair Zelda, is missing isn't she?"
"Ganondorf!" the king interrupted. "Enough with your toying. How did you return and what do you want with me?" Ganondorf turned away from the king and said "How? You ask. In good time you will know. And with you good king? Well, I want to join you." Ganondorf turned and knelt on one knee as he finsihed speaking. The king was speechless.
As the king was left speechless by Ganondorf's words, Link was brought to shouting by the words of his possessor. "He was a civilian!" "He was an annoyance and needed to die." "You will not control me!" "On the contrary Link, I already do." Link grunted and his breath quickened. He began wrenching, turning, twisting. When it seemed the Fierce Deity had him at last, the Triforce of Courage brought it's power forth to aid Link in subsiding his unseen foe. The twisting stopped, the breath slowed, and his mind...quiet. "..Thank you." Link whispered. Although it seemed Link had control over his mind, his body still maintained the appearance of the Fierce Deity and that meant that it would return. His thought train was interuppted by someone coming up to him on a horse at full gallop.
That person was Seth. "Link is that you?" "Yes Seth, it's me." "But what happened?" Seth questioned. Link told him about the horrible and confusing events that had taken place over the last day or so. Seth listened intently and when Link had finished he began to tell him of his intentions when he was interrupted. "Wait." Link said. "Seth why did you come to Hyrule? What do you want from me?" Seth responded "Never mind that now. I have more important news to tell you. The kind has ordered 500 of his best men to search for Zelda. I offered my services to him as a way of payment for her kindness too me. He asked me too find you and..." Link rose up and didn't even give Seth a chance to ask his question and said "When do we leave?"
Ch. 8
As the king's army began their search for Zelda. Zelda herself was searching...searching for answers. After she arrived at the fortress she had immediately been thrown into a prison cell. Her wizard captor had told her too wait patiently as his master was busy at the moment and would get too her as soon as possible. So she was left to occupying herself with trying to figure out where she was exactly. She had made little progress, save for the assumptions that she wasn't in Hyrule or Termina. Giving up on her quest until further knowledge was learned she began to fiddle with the grass in her cell.
Meanwhile, Sashani was seeking council with his master. He had been waiting some time and was growing rather impatient. He figured he was meeting with his war council or the Dragonlords of Fabrilli. But he didn't expect him to take this long. At last the guards called for him to enter. Sashani was glad to finally be entering, but he did so slowly and cautiously for he knew how irritable the Dark Lord could be after a meeting. When he entered his master was seated at his thrown which as usual was covered in a shroud of shadows. When he saw Sashani he said "My good wizard. What is it you wish to speak to me about?" Sashani carefully chose his words "Well...my lord. It is about our recent prisoner." The dark lord's visage grew grim and serious. "Go on." he said. "Well, I was wondering what you were going to do to her." "So the Mighty Sashani, Sashani the Shadow. The great mage of dark arts, has a soft spot for a princess. How quaint." Sashani winced at his master's mockery of him, but he continued his pursuit of an answer. "My lord, I do not have a soft spot for her, I merely want to know the reason behind her capture. All I know is that it had something to do with the success of our conquest." The dark lord said, "As you know Hyrule must fall in order for Salvanest to survive. Hyrule is the last remaining piece and resistance. We are in need of resources..and well you know the rest wizard. And the princess, oh the princess. She has something I need, and another which belongs to me...or once did in a time long past." "But I am sure you don't need to..." Sashani was interrupted by the cold hiss of his master "That is all you need to know for now wizard. If you value your life you will silence yourself!" Sashani bowed and quickly made for the door, not wanting to anger his master further. The dark lord said one last thing "Sashani. you questions bring me doubt about your loyalty. Make sure you check yourself before the prisoner's judgment. Or..I'm afraid..very bad circumstances may befall you." Sashani nodded and left.
Sashani's close friend and companion Crion was waiting outside, and when the wizard came up to him the two quickly moved out of the area. As they walked Sashani said "These are trying times for Salvanest friend. Our master's intentions our getting out of hand. I'm afraid something terrible is going to happen." Sashani's voice trailed off as he went out of earshot of something in the shadows...something that should not have heard what he said....something that could destroy Sashani forever.
There you go. I know they are short but I hope you enjoyed them.
P.S. I need some ideas for Ch. 9-10. If you have any ideas on where you think the story is going please message me.
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Hyruleansoldier
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I'm afraid I won't be too much help... They were rather short, but still good. Where ARE you going with it?  |
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Ezlo's Apprentice
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I think we were just robbed. Two chapters which when combined look strangely like one in length...? Sadly I don't have any idea where to take it either. Sure you'll come up with something though. |
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ZeldaMaster
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I knew you guys wouldn't be happy with the length. I am really sorry about that. I just got stuck and couldn't think of what too write. I didn't want to have a completely horrible chapter/chapters so I just stopped before it got really bad. But it seems I failed and these chapters did bomb. I am sorry I will try to better next time and really brainstorm before writing.
These things are a lot harder to write then you guys think. A pain and a joy.
If I told you guys where I was going, then I would spoil it. I just wanted your thoughts and where YOU think it is going. Sort of like just tell me your thoughts so far and how you think the characters will develop etc.
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Hyruleansoldier
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My question was of the rhetorical kind of course... If you'd told us the rest, there would be little need for the actual story now would there Take your time, and surprise us |
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ZeldaMaster
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That is true.
I will take my time on this next chapter too make up for the bombs that are ch. 7 and 8. I hope I didn;t lose any of your support. Hope EA isn't too important, he should understand the pain of writing these things. As well as the difficulty.
I do have one question for you guys though. What do you think about Ganondorf's revelation?
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Ales
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« #71 on: June 01, 2007 » |
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Terribly terribly sorry for being absent for so long, i haven't caught up with all of your chapters yet but i'm glad to see it's still just as good and still under production...i'm rooting for ya |
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ZeldaMaster
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« #72 on: June 15, 2007 » |
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Thanks Ales. Good too see you back.
Progress has been greatly hindered on my fan-fic due to work, some laziness, partying of course, and now having my wisdom teeth removed (hurts like hell). But I will get it too you guys as soon as possible.
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Sheldon Cooper PhD
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« #73 on: June 23, 2007 » |
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Wow...just wow ZM.
Just dont screw the next few chapters over.
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Ales
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« #74 on: June 25, 2007 » |
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Just take your time and don't rush |
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ZeldaMaster
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« #75 on: June 26, 2007 » |
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I am. A lot of people are hammering me for it though, and I just have to tell them it is coming and I am trying to make it worth the wait.
I worked on the next chapter last night some more and it is coming along alright. But do you guys want me to post that one as soon as it's done or would you rather have me post up more than one chapter?
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Sheldon Cooper PhD
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« #76 on: July 12, 2007 » |
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next chapter sometime sooon Eh ZM?
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ZeldaMaster
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« #77 on: July 12, 2007 » |
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Possibly, probably not before I have to leave on the trip, but right after that is a sure possibility.
But, the question was, "Do you want me to post one, or two chapters up?" It will mean a longer wait yes, but hey.
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BloodHawk
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« #78 on: July 13, 2007 » |
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I read your fan-fic it is a very interesting story. Look forward too your next chapter.
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ZeldaMaster
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« #79 on: July 13, 2007 » |
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Well thank you. I will hopefully have it up after I get back from New Mexico in 2 weeks.
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